Any Grammar Mistakes? Part 1 Dont worry about last sentence no more characters left?

Question:Jay-z
* First Influenced me when i read his biography.
* Inspired me by even if you fail early in life it is never too late to change.
Eminem
*First Influenced me when I listened to his cd titled The Eminem Show.
*He has inspired me by no matter what race you're you can still make it to the top.
Oprah
*First influenced me when i watched her show.
* Has inspired me by no matter what type of family you come from be it happy or abusive you can still move on with your life and enjoy it.
Michael Jordan
*First influenced me when i saw one of his games in 1996.
*Influenced me even more when I heard he didn't make his high school basketball team.
*It told me to never give up on anything I wanted.
Einstein
*First influenced me when i heard about him in my Chemistry class.
*Influenced me by showing me while most of us are not smart as him we should work hard to learn all we can.
Al Gore
*First influenced me when I seen his documentary An Inconvenient Truth.
*Influenced me to start taking care of

Answers:
"First Influenced me when i read his biography."

Should be: First Influenced me when I read his biography.


"Inspired me by even if you fail early in life it is never too late to change."

Should be: Inspired me by showing me that even if you fail early in life it is never too late to change.


"First Influenced me when I listened to his cd titled The Eminem Show"

Should be: First Influenced me when I listened to his cd titled "The Eminem Show".


"He has inspired me by no matter what race you're you can still make it to the top"

Should be: He has inspired me by proving that no matter what race you are, you can still make it to the top.


"First influenced me when i watched her show."

Should be: First influenced me when I watched her show.


"Has inspired me by no matter what type of family you come from be it happy or abusive you can still move on with your life and enjoy it."

Should be: Has inspired me by proving that no matter what type of family you come from, be it happy or abusive, you can still move on with your life and enjoy it.


"First influenced me when i saw one of his games in 1996."

Should be: First influenced me when I saw one of his games in 1996.


"First influenced me when i heard about him in my Chemistry class."

Should be: First influenced me when I heard about him in my Chemistry class.


"Influenced me by showing me while most of us are not smart as him we should work hard to learn all we can."

Should be: Influenced me by showing me that while most of us are not as smart as he was, we should work hard to learn all we can.


"First influenced me when I seen his documentary An Inconvenient Truth."

Should be: First influenced me when I saw his documentary "An Inconvenient Truth".


"Influenced me to start taking care of"

That's where it ends so I'm not sure about the rest of the sentance!

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I like your list of inspirational people! The mistakes I found were mostly missing words, and also you have forgotten to use a capitol "I". Remember, it's always "I", never "i".
too long and boring.
Jay-Z
* First influenced me when I read his biography.
* Inspired me by even if you fail early in life it is never too late to change.
Eminem
*First influenced me when I listened to his CD titled The Eminem Show.
*Has inspired me by no matter what race you are you can still make it to the top.
Oprah
*First influenced me when I watched her show.
* Has inspired me by no matter what type of family you come from be it happy or abusive you can still move on with your life and enjoy it.
Michael Jordan
*First influenced me when I saw one of his games in 1996.
*Influenced me even more when I heard he didn't make his high school basketball team. This helped me to never give up on anything I wanted.
Einstein
*First influenced me when I heard about him in my Chemistry class.
*Influenced me by showing me while most of us are not smart as him we should work hard to learn all we can.
Al Gore
*First influenced me when I seen his documentary An Inconvenient Truth.
*Influenced me to start taking care of

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