Can you check my grammer?

Question:1) Why would you want?
My anwser:
Be able to work with different people, flexible hours, and a postive work experience.

Is this good? ANything catchy?

2) What Past Experiences have you had?
My response:
I am a current volunteer at Raccon City Hospital in fields of Materials Management, and in the Gift Shop. Dedicated more than 260 hours of service to my community because the best way to move forward is giving back. Also, spending every Thursdays working with children from all ages at Kumon.


Any changes you would like to add or replace?

Im 15 years old if anybody asks.

Answers:
1) I would have the oppurtunity to work with different people; I would also have flexible hours and a positive work experience.

2) I currently volunteer at Raccon City Hospital; I volunteer in the Gift Shop and in the Materials Management department. I have dedicated over 260 hours of community service because I believe the best way to move forward is to give back. I also spend every Thursday working with children of all ages at Kumon.

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